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Lol. 10 points for the sectors.

Boy am I glad you put up this new chapter. I was beginning to worry that it would end up as another unfinished fic.

I really enjoyed how TFA Optimus figured out the purpose to being left in charge by G1 Optimus. The paint bombs, the logic puzzles, the crew still having to do their chores after it was all figured out, I LOVED IT!!! I bet, after seeing how Young Optimus commanded and figured out all the traps and puzzles, the crew has a whole new level of respect for him.

And I can't *wait* to see how they react to Sentinel and the other-dimensional Autobots. Once Sentinel opens that big mouth of his regarding Optimus, I can just imagine somebot (maybe Sunstreaker or Sideswipe) saying, "If that was how OUR Sentinel Prime was like, then maybe Megatron did *us* a favor by tearing *him* apart!"

This is my favourite fan fiction I have read to date!!! I can't remember if I've reviewed already or not but I love it!!!

I really hope you get chance to continue it...sooonn. :D

There is definitely not enough OP/P out there, this should change!! :)

You know, it's been over two weeks since you last updated this. I it's not because you got writer's block or anything like that, because that would be a crying shame, since this is one of my most favorite fics here, so far.

P.S. Sorry for the second review on chapter 9, I forgot to tell you something. There's a recurring spelling mistake, you write Prowl small = prowl.

I always thought myself Optimus knows exceptionally well how others think and work in their minds and what he has to do to make them act the way he wants. Just think about Masterson and how OP goaded him into transforming Starscream's body. Despite the moment being hilarious and cool (OP's smirk XD), it found it surprising that he had learned about this particular part of human culture and knew now what "type" Masterson is. It's like he can analyze anyone he meets instantly just by interacting with them (at least it's like this since season 2).

Finally someone who writes OP as the smug, bold glitch he sometimes is (again: him smirking at Masterson). It's sometimes boring/annoying that many fics depict him insecure, while he clearly shows he can kick butt and KNOWS it.

I found the interfacing too short in my taste, but it was because you focused on the characterization rather than the smut.

I haven't read much TFA fiction but I am a big fan of it and G1! You have captured the characters brilliantly. I love this story can't wait to read more!! :)

I can't wait for the next update.

I wish I could've seen the look on Sentinel Prime's face!
I also wish Optimus Prime could've been there to see it,
that would have been a riot too.He needs a confidence booster, poor Optimus.

Also, I can't wait to see what the two Jazz's do!

8D', 'KyuKoneko

God, I wish I could see a picture of Sentinal's face when Prime tells him his name. Priceless! He needs to get knocked down a peg or 2.

as... odd, as it must be to write this.. and intriguing as it is to read, i find you still surprise me around every corner. believe me, that's a good thing. i get tired of writers who become predictable, and that is one thing you aren't. i know i haven't reviewed a lot lately, even though i've been following faithfully. just multitasking like hell.
I wonder what an autobot's perception of human toddlers would be? i know mine can be annoying.... lol. even if i do love him dearly....