rate_review Reviews

I loled hard at your sectors. XDDDDDDD H1N1, R2D2, then WD40? So many lols, my man.

And this fic is awesome. < 3

I'm glad you brought Prowl back to life. Thinking about how the show ended and how that would affect Optimus... Not fun. But now they're together again. Yay.

Mmm, great ending. *licks lips*

*SQUEES A HAPPY FAN GIRLY SQUEAL!!* This was amazing!! So good, entertaining and well written and damn hot!! *files away in favourites* I will be keeping my eyes peeled for the epilogue and your next fic. Well done! XD

Oh very nicely done! I was happy to find you had updated. The drawing on Starscream was classic, I was chuckling at that one. And you write the dynamic between the spark linked 'bots really well so it doesn't get confusing as to who you're referring to. Looking forward to the next update! Excellent stuff.

vivid imagination... yeah, let me say that while i have my moments of still trying to wrap my mind around bot sex... at least of the transformer variety... lol... i must admit you can still write some wicked smut. alas, i think i must needs to go watch some more of the new series, cause i have to fill my head wiht your descriptions, as i have faulty memory of the few episodes i have seen. (i totally suck at keeping characters straight)

and sadly, i forgot you changed your update day, so it's tuesday... and i'm finally going.. oh yeah.. Duh. I'll catch more soon!!

and yes... Jazz... *drools*

*squees* been looking forward to this story update. Nicely done very visual I must go find that cooling fan :P looking forward to the next update :)

The sex seemed a little hastily done this time. But it was still hot!

Snog? Really? I can't see Prime saying it.

:D I really like to see what the two Primes cook up for the Prowls. As for ideas, how about they tie up the two Prowls and let them pleasure each other (though without overload, maybe stopped by a toy), moving them around in different positions like facing each others interfaces or just one of them licking the other's valve/spike? After some of this 'torture', each Optimus takes 'his' respective Prowl.

It's nice to see that you build the smut in as part of the plot and not as the "plot" itself. It isn't much in the length, but I liked that Prowl thought he didn't want Jazz to see him as a failure. You remembered it isn't "Five Servos of Doom" yet and this is what Prowl probably has felt since Yoketron's death like. Wonderful detail.
The image of Elder Prowl smacking one fist in the other hand is just so badass - even more so as I imagine him grinning evilly. XD

Why didn't UM told Optimus everything about his plan? And what part exactly? Though, I have a feeling it's the part with UM putting himself up as a lure and expecting to die...

Love it! ^^
Very enjoyable chapter dear, and i cant wait for the foursome~ even with the hint of P/P makes the wait even harder XP
Thank you for the chapter!