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OMG! O.O Blackout really IS a sick mech here... I almost pity Barricade here. Almost!

o.O O.O >.< Poor Barricade... Now i really fell sorry for the 'con... Nobody deserve such a fate, it's just too wrong! I would hug him if I was cerin I wouldn,t get slagged fot that! ^.^

Poor mech... I'm growing to like Barricade, it's crazy! *hug him... and get slagged*

Bumblebrr knows now... I wonder if the others'll got to know somedy. May be a good thing for the poor Cade.

Moar? Please?

Absolutely lovely chapter; I'm not to keen on the chapter title, but that's your choice. You have no idea how much I want to read the next chapter. If you can think of any words that are better than lovely then please replace it and put that word in its place cause that's what it is: heavenly, exquisite. I can go on forever bt I don't think you want to read a review of words that all mean the same in the end: fantastic job.

You really do have a way with torture that's amazing. I was never a fan of it but now...maybe I should read your other transformers fics. You have an amazing talent and I love every bit of it lol I'll bee reviewing your other stories cause I wanna see more of this wonderful torture lol.

Okay, I finally went and made an account so I can review stories here. The general concept of this story is great, the torture is nice, got to love taking strong willed people and turning them into frightened sparklings. A few name mix ups in chapter 1, but otherwise nothing much to complain about. Don't feel bad if you don't get a lot of reviews. Like me most readers who don't post stories probably don't have an acct.

Wow. I have been keeping up with this story and I have to say it is one of the most disturbing.
Nice work. Poor Cade. Being used like a toy is so bad for the self-esteem and mental health.
I wonder what the higher-ups would think of what happened with him. I don't think they would agree to how he has been treated. In fact if Ratchet was to find out I think he would fly into a pretty big rage.
Hmmm... I wonder what would happen if Cade was around when the Autobots actually were angry on his behalf.
I can picture a very confused Barricade.

All in all excellent story. Kind of slow at times and a bit much on the dramatics in terms of Barricade. His emotions are kind of all over the place.
I like the interactions though and having Bee not being the only young bot around is a nice change.

Keep with the updates. I will be watching.

oh, looks good, some typos but worth reading. update soon please.