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I REALLY like to see More of This Deal that They Agree on....

***This could be a very interesting temporary partnership***

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.... I just read this because I'm slow. First thing I want to say is that you didn't cross them over reasonably well. That cross was so well put together, I almost went back to the series and said 'Logan's in there somewhere... I just know he is." Actually... TFA would have been so much cooler if that had been the series. Anyway, in terms of the actual writing, there were some basic grammer and flow things (personal opinion I think 'got in the fucking way' is more natural and flows better than 'fucking got in the way' but that's personal opinion) [OMFP! I finally said something that related to actual constructive criticism!] I would love to see more of this, like what does Logan typically do with Prowl (since his bike's sentient now...) What happens when the deal is concluded? Does Prowl continue to just show up? And a question I had, did Logan know that when Prowl said that he was the first, did he realize it meant first ever and not just first human? What happens when the Autobots realize that Logan has essentially 'kidnapped' Prowl? (That's how I think they would see it anyway) When do they realize it? could that impact how much he wants to go back? How well does this partnership work? I can see a lot of cultural misunderstandings, as mutants have certain things that they don't talk about (in some cases even more than most humans) and Prowl's an alien, essentially. How does that work out? (Personally, I'd love for this to turn into another saga of yours, but I like it just as a oneshot too... not to put more on your plate or anything)

That broke my brain, but in a good way. X3 OHLAWD.