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November 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
For the most part this fic is very well-written. But just a couple things I spotted: Seeker, Autobot and Decepticon are all proper nouns, so they should always be capped. Other than that, well done.
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November 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
While chapter 1 was reasonably proof read, chapter 3 had many glaring errors of spelling and plural/singular. I get the feeling that you rushed this a bit to get it published and didn't fully proof read it.
The plot was good and so was the flow. Just slow down and re-read your work several times before you publish it. We readers can wait an extra day or two.
Other than that you did a very good job. Although I'm not a fan of the new animated series, I found your characterization to be on the mark from the few shows I've caught of this series.
The plot was good and so was the flow. Just slow down and re-read your work several times before you publish it. We readers can wait an extra day or two.
Other than that you did a very good job. Although I'm not a fan of the new animated series, I found your characterization to be on the mark from the few shows I've caught of this series.