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by yodana

schedule November 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ok, the idea was interesting... But there were too many technical issues for it to be believable.

Mechs don't have 'eyes' they have 'optics'

And I'm still trying to picture a three ton Hummer with hands big enough to surround a human, using those fingers on such a small area of human anatomy.

This idea could've been developed to a more believable plot.. There's always the gear shift that a woman could use... LOL...
person Neko234
schedule October 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
FFFF >///D You know I totally fapped to this! X///3 Sexiest thing EEEVEEER!! >8///D