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by DeeDaday

person Kyme
schedule January 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
METAL PENII! I vote for more. For the sake of prawns. The idea of Lockdown getting a mod like that just to antagonise Prowl (and make for very hot interfacing) is like... Very conducive to the prawns. 8Db
person hoppersnail
schedule January 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow.

Normally I can't stand threesomes or outside sex with my "established couples," which is why I wanted Anicon to die a lingering, gruesome death. But you did it, and I liked it. Torque fits with them, and I like her as a character all on her own.

It doesn't hurt, of course, that ever since you wrote Rehabilitation I've been wanting a sticky-type fic exploiting that little opening Lockdown used. This was perfect, and I adore you for writing it.
person StarShineMB
schedule January 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh YES!!! Darling, you have done the world a favor writing this! Torque is deffinitly not your average OC. She's very interesting and sexy! And Prowl actually giving in??? OMG!! That was surprising, though not totally unexpected. Love this too much for words!
schedule January 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You have always made your spark bonding stories so erotic, so titillating... That there was no need to be 'pressured' into designing new modifications to do interface without spark bonding. The artistic way you use primarily introspect as your erotic medium is so unique, so different - that you inspired me to write true non-interface sparkbonding into my later chapters of Market Comodity: Mentors.

I hope you do not feel that I was one of the ones who has 'pressured' you into incuding interface to overload within your stories. Your erotica needed no modification.
person catc10
schedule January 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
GOD I LOVE YOU.
*bashing head on wall*
Seriously.
ONLY YOU can make what starts as PWP into TOTAL Plot-gasm.
Only you.
*bows in submission*
ME
schedule January 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Very nice~ Poor embarrassed Prowl. X3 The cuddling at the end was so sweet though.
person Evil Killer Poptarts
schedule January 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ZOMG. I looooove this universe of yours! This is exactly what I needed, too- I was at work, at the grocery store with a client (I'm a case manager, working with the mentally ill,) when the little snippet of "Partners" you put in here flashed in my mind and I started blushing furiously to be thinking of robot smut when I needed to be making sure my client bought real food and not cake and ice cream. I love your writing. Please, don't stop! ^_^