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Oh jesus, I think I just lost a lung through my nasal cavity, I was snickering so hard. Beautiful, beautiful setup for such a grand punchline. Sexy, devilish, and funny all in one!

I'd love to see the other two personalities, especially with your talented touch, but if it's just not hitting your spark anymore I can deal. I have this to re-read and re-enjoy. (Now with proper mental images...)

I could see Cold getting off to wearing femme armor (he's such a trans fan)... You simply MUST write for Blitzwing's other two personalities! It's only fair, after all.

great story, I lol'd.

Well, I was thoroughly entertained. And, I'll admit, you got me. The way you had listed it made me feel that the Random Blitzwing was the one that liked to dress like a girl. Not that I mind either way, of course, because Animated Blitzwing is the shit. Fo' sho'.

Now that I've fnished making a fool of myself... I think that was a pretty awesome one-shot and I would love to see more. It would be nice to see Starscream interact with Blitzwing's other personalities. ^_^

Go ahead and write the next two chapters please.

I don't even know how to respond to that. That's so...wow. It's disturbing yes amazing; incredibly sexy but gave me bad mental thoughts. I really don't know where I stand on this Harley. And never did I think it was Cold Blitzwing, I thought it was Crazy Blitzwing because I really can't see Cold doing something like wearing fishnets; but hey that's my opinion.

Also, I was just wondering when I can expect a new chapter of: Already Broken, Becoming Mama Bear and Pain Without Limits to come out. You've really made these 3 awesome and I'm dying to read more.
~ NetherOnyx