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this is going so good! great job ^__^ can't wait for more!

This is really nice. I'm not a Zutara fan AT ALL, but if it involves Aang with Katara as well... Oh God. I have a sick mind... XP

Aang was getting agitated by her statements, “That is the kind of thinking that got us in this war in the first place. How is the rest of the world supposed to move on if we can not forgive? If you keep saying that there is no good in them, they are murderers, and they can’t be trusted then how long do you think it will be before they begin to believe that? How can they reform if people like you are stereotyping them? The Fire Nation took his mother away too, at least you still have your father and you know he loves you. Who does Zuko have? He turned his back on an entire nation to do what was right Katara. Do you not believe that is difficult for him? I am supposed to be the Avatar; I am supposed to bring balance to the world. How can I bring balance to the world if I can not even bring balance to this camp?”

That was my favorite quote of all time. I loved it. :) It expresses the ideas I want to in my own story. XD GREAT WORK :D TIS AWESOME! I'm interested to see how Katara, Aang and Zuko interact. Keep writing!

I love it so far. Keep going! ^^ I don't like Zutara but this is much different to me. :) I do wish for Katara, Aang and Zuko to be friendlier together. :) I'm interested to see how this turns out!

You conveyed Zuko's emotions very well. It's true, he never learned how to make friends. :(

Okay, I'll stop being a pest! Nice story so far!