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June 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
That was crap.
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May 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
How could you make something so innocent so..so..so sexually crazed?! (Ah, well, at least they weren't screwing like bunnies!)
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May 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I liked it yes it is pervy but this IS a adult sitter ter all ( this is a message for the offended ones who forget this is for adults) by the way how old are the girls in this ?? I suggest you make them older ..
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May 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This was terrible, even for smut.
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May 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
great story!
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May 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Don't listen to Hugo. If you are against this kind of thing why did you com to this site and the pressed anime/cartoon then Powerpuff girls for God sakes. Hurry and update.
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May 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
out of curiousity i had to read it. it wasn't 1/2 bad. keeping writing. i'd like to see what happens. odd how i was able to picture the entire thing in my head all car lik like. curse this imagination of mine. haha.
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May 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
That was good. When will the next be posted?
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May 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I did not think you could write a lemon with the pp girl and not make it corny........"_" well done!
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May 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Great. I loved that. Please update soon. Ever since Fanfiction.net dropped NC17 stuff like this has been almost impossible to find. Well, again, please update soon.