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August 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is so good, i bet you could be a pretty cool guy! Please take a look at my link below and send me a message!
http://profiles.yahoo.com/misericordia82
http://profiles.yahoo.com/misericordia82
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July 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
From the looks of it, the girls are teenagers but the hell is up with Mojo and the serum? You have to get back to that!!!! Please tell me he beds one or all of the girls? Please!?
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June 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I'll have to agrhat hat the last chapter was slightly disappointing but I still like the fic. I'm especially interested to where Buttercup has disappeared to. Well written apart from some grammar errors though I suppose those can hardly be modified.
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June 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh yeah, and please update soon, preferably within a week or so.
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June 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
sorry i didnt get a hard one........im too much of a girl to get one lol......but i did have to 'take care' of myself hehehe
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June 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Don't get me wrong, this is a good story but the ending to the secound chapter kinda werided me out a little. The line about her being in a pool of blood didn't feel right. I don't know, maybe I should just chalk it up to what your into.
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June 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ouch, the secound chapter is... well... fucked up. I would consider revising it, just a little. I know I don't have room because of the story I got up here, but you could leave it on a more happy note...
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June 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
LMAO! Man, that was an hilarious chapter. I get what you mean about the 'sadistic' side of yourself you were telling me about now. Great chapter, ignore anyone that can't handle it, cause that's just too bad if they can't.
You made another excellent point: How do so many fanfiction authors update so frequently? Don't they have jobs or school to be busy with? Maybe they're just people in their thirties living with their parents. Could be.
You made another excellent point: How do so many fanfiction authors update so frequently? Don't they have jobs or school to be busy with? Maybe they're just people in their thirties living with their parents. Could be.
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June 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oo...get to the Mojo-ing. Yay! Literary porn! Yay! Okay, you haterz, for crying out loud, this is an ADULT site! Let's act like ADULTS! St00pid....LoL! ^_^ I can't wait for the next chapter!
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June 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Heh heh, cool, cool, cartoon pedo smut rules!
Write a fic of the PPG getting snuffed and tortured to death as well *LOL*
Write a fic of the PPG getting snuffed and tortured to death as well *LOL*