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March 21, 2013 at 12:00 AM
That was awesome beyond awesome I loved it you should have The Rowdy Ruff Boys take turns three way bang ms keane each getting a chance at her ass,mouth,and pussy and end with each comeing in a different hole no pulling out thow have her swallow each one's juzz and each get come her pussy and all three get to come in her ass to that would be so perfect to read
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June 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
are you ever going to finish/add more to this? its rather good
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May 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
mmmmmm im so...WET i fucked my self whilst readin this...^.~
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September 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
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March 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ok,i swear to GOD this is not a flame but you got alot of the names and junk mixed,let me clear it out k?cause i used to watch the show when i was little,fat guy:big billy,short little guy:little Catrabo(?),hissing guy:HIS name is snake!!!,leader:his
name is ACE!!!ok?ok,good but other than that,it's good,i like it,defiently got potential,keep up the great work!!!!!and to all
those people who keep sending flames to this MARVOLOUS writer,GO TO HELL IF YOU CAN FRIGGIN HANDLE THIS!!!!!!!!!!!!
name is ACE!!!ok?ok,good but other than that,it's good,i like it,defiently got potential,keep up the great work!!!!!and to all
those people who keep sending flames to this MARVOLOUS writer,GO TO HELL IF YOU CAN FRIGGIN HANDLE THIS!!!!!!!!!!!!
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December 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
The new ending to the secound chapter is much better!
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December 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Eew, the powerpuff girls?
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November 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
wow...just wow...lol
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September 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Cool! The Professo pro proving for once that most men really DO fantasise about girls in a threesome (though perving on your daughters, Professor? OK, so technically they're not his daughters, but still...).
I like Mojo's latest plan for taking over Townsville - making himself so sexy that no-one and nothing can stop him. I wonder if it'll work...? :/ Hmm...
Oh and BTW, the Mayor's aide is called Miss BELLUM, not BELLOM. Minor detail. :)
I like Mojo's latest plan for taking over Townsville - making himself so sexy that no-one and nothing can stop him. I wonder if it'll work...? :/ Hmm...
Oh and BTW, the Mayor's aide is called Miss BELLUM, not BELLOM. Minor detail. :)
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September 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I have to admit, that didn't do it for me at all - don't get me wrong, it was very well written, I just didn't find it arousing that the Professor would, well...rape Bubbles in such a fashion.
Also, in this chapter, Bubbles says that "its icky, what they make me do" in reference to the previous sexcapades in the bathtub in chapter 1. But she didn't seem to be complaining or trying to get them stop at the time, did she? No. And why, pray tell? 'Cos she was enjoying it (it was made quite clear from the narration that she was enjoying it, too).
BTW, when is this gonna get to Mojo Jojo using his new to simultaneously get some action AND take over Townsville? :D
Also, in this chapter, Bubbles says that "its icky, what they make me do" in reference to the previous sexcapades in the bathtub in chapter 1. But she didn't seem to be complaining or trying to get them stop at the time, did she? No. And why, pray tell? 'Cos she was enjoying it (it was made quite clear from the narration that she was enjoying it, too).
BTW, when is this gonna get to Mojo Jojo using his new to simultaneously get some action AND take over Townsville? :D