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October 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very good! Two crits, though. Luann is actually Peggy's neice, not Hank's. Luann's dad is Peggy's brother.
Also, the neighbors are Laoshin, not Veitnamese.
Otherwise, very good!
Also, the neighbors are Laoshin, not Veitnamese.
Otherwise, very good!
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March 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great story now update if u need ideas email me
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March 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great story now update if u need ideas email me
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June 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Yeah, have that cunt gett into prostitiution and sex slavery!
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June 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
i've always thought Lu ann should be a slut. Thanks for maikng it happen
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May 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow, just wow! I like! I also like your PPG one. I want to read more of both! I would love to see Peggy lay Bobby just to spite Hank!
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May 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is really good! You've gotten a lot better at this stuff lately, haven't you? Very entertaining piece. I must go now, to the waterfall only found inside the home.