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it.was great next time let him give her anil

continue...lol

I thought it was good. The dialog was very true to the characters. Shame you did not continue it.
SailorNemesis

"Son, masturbation is what your daddy does when he doesn’t want to go through the agony of making love with your mother “ Hank said whilst pouring some orange juice."

OH GOD... I CAN'T STOP LAUGHING

you don't know anything about King of the Hill the Kahn's are Laosian and i found your story to be extremely offensive and stereotypical and extremely derrogative of the south. You also should work on your grammar and spelling--and maybe write about a show you're more familiar with or an actual fan of :)

man, I would like too see you finish this

Sick! How can you write such things about King of the Hill?:*) It was interesting though. By the way, Luanne is Peggy's blood Niece. Luanne's father is Peggy's brother, not Hanks. So technically, It is not inbreeding. You Should Write more. I did like it. Oh, Peggy should get revenge on Hank by screwing somebody, like Bill or try to seduce boomhouer when he is drunk! NO, Get Joseph drunk and have her seduce him!!!

First off, you're a complete fucking moron. Have you ever watched King Of The Hill before? They don't live in a two-story house. There are no stairs to go down for breakfast. Luanne is Peggy's brother's daughter. Hank is only related by his marriage to Peggy. You didn't even portray their personalities correctly. I'd say that you were a thirteen-year-old kid, or at least you should hope so, as this was below a middle school reading level. Khan and his family aren't Vietnamese. Why is it that every story on here involves incest, often with minors. Sick fuck.

Hmm, not bad. I'n not really keen on incest but it was a good story. Loved Hank's last line. Here's hoping it isn't true...

Not only is everyone wildly out of character, but you also got your facts wrong. Luanne is Peggy's brother's daughter and the neighbors are Laotian, not Vietnamese.