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July 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I liked the story.
It really took you 12 pages (wow) It takes me lots of pages to get a story together.
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It really took you 12 pages (wow) It takes me lots of pages to get a story together.
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December 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very nice. No it wasn't too hard to understand who was saying what. I think you did a really good job. Well done.
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July 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very good!! hot!! loved to see how Valmont submits to Dark Jackie! very good story
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May 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Great writing. Nice and hot. Also a great way to put them together. So what happens when the two halves are put back together? Does Jackie have both sets of memories? I'd like to see this fic continued in that line. Keep up the great work.
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May 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
that was actually pretty good. the men seemed incharacter enough so that's a point for ya. I hope to see other works by u soon enough