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for The Unforgiven Series

by Firefly4000

schedule February 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
the hate I feel for Barkudo is not as that I have felt before none shall ever come close to the evil barkudo wields and I hope uncle will call upon the demons and also tarakudo and his generals to help save the world from this great evil that has fallen on the world.
schedule January 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
this story has great potential, but you constantly use the wrong homonym. Your = Possessive (belonging to You), You're = contraction (You are).
person Dragolover2
schedule August 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Whoa! Great chapter! That was totally awesome! I loved it! Poor Bai Tsa and Dai Gui. Poor Hsi Wu and Jade too. Don't take so long to update this time. Okay?
person Chad
schedule August 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Cool chapter and story ^^
person Scythe the blade master
schedule August 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You rock out loud not just for the music but this fic is the bomb do more please I crave more
person James
schedule August 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You have to update come on please if not I shall try sky diving without a parrachute if I survive please make more
person Dragolover2
schedule July 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooh, scary. I hope Hsi Wu and Jade are okay. We get to see more of the other demons, right? I guess I need to read the next chapter.
person Dragolover2
schedule July 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Scary. Freaky. Creepy. And did I mention...scary? Great chapter. When are you gonna update the rest? I wanna see what happens to Jade and Hsi Wu and the demons and Jackie and the rest. Please update soon.
person Dragolover2
schedule July 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Uh-oh! Busted! Poor Jade and Hsi Wu! I hope things work out for them. Even though I know they will cause you're writing the story. ^_^
person Dragolover2
schedule July 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I feels sorry for Hsi Wu. That must've hurt. HEy, when you were talking about the demons, did you mean Xiao the wind demon, or were you talking about Dai Gui? Just want that cleared up.