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for The Price

by Donathan

person thomas
schedule April 27, 2015 at 12:00 AM
can i be in the story?
schedule September 29, 2013 at 12:00 AM
You're so cruel for only doing a one-shot when the end screams for it to be continued.
person dexia
schedule January 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awesome!!!

You have to write another one, this was way too good to be allowed to remain a one-shot...
schedule April 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was hot.
=)
schedule October 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I always did like this fic.
schedule July 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hi good so far but could we have more please. You have left it way to open at the end there.
person nick
schedule August 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ummm can u add more? cuz its good so far....and i kinda wanna read more so yea....please?
person Your Mom's Face
schedule July 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*laughs maniachally*

Oh my god, you made Dil all EVIL!!

That was...

Just great.

Toodles!!
schedule September 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*smirks* I liked this one. I loved Dil's manipulative intent towards Tommy. Pretty good description.

Only problem was there was not nearly enough indentation on the paragraphs.

I dunno what else to write into the review, but good job. I'm not a Rugrats/All Grown Up fan, so good job. I like.
person dsa
schedule August 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
MAN DUDE YEAH