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for Last Chance

by ShadowSlayer

person Odd\'s Gurl
schedule November 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This was a great chapter! Hmm, who would I like to see him with. Well, I haven't seen many Odd/Sissy pairings while i've seen a lot of Odd/Ulrich so i'll go with Sissy.
person Odd\'s Gurl
schedule November 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Forgot to add... UPDATE QUICK! Must read more!!!
person FuKouHei (2 lazy 2 log in)
schedule November 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Sissy! No, i'm kidding. For the love of god, choose ulrich, not sissy! Never sissy! no! anyway.... good chappie. i'm glad you finally updated.
person sum1
schedule November 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This isn't bad. Feel really sorry for Odd though. *Kicks Jim in da nuts* Jerk! Anyway, keep writing!
person Tommi Gurrl
schedule November 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Eek! ::practically falls over::

You are a natural smut writer, I swear! This was so good and, *cough*, descriptive (in a good way). Amazing! >< I can hardly write. I need to read the next chapter soon~ O.O

Oh, and I researched Code Lyoko before I read this story. It looks reall y good. I want to watch it. I'm liking Yumi a lot since she reminds me of myself (the wearing all black, asian, personality wise). Ulrich is pretty hot and Odd is... odd, lol.

Anyways, great job! :;rates five:: ^_^
person Tommi Gurrl
schedule November 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
::squees again::

Man. this is good. Will you tell me if you update again? I shall come running. ><

Great fic!
person DracoDormiens
schedule November 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Heeeey! Are you gonna update this anytime soon? If so, E-mail me when you do, I love it!
person Kat's Paw
schedule October 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You asked us to review for both so here I am. I decided to read the whole thing in the end. You were right to say it was detailed. lol. Anyway, like i've said twice already, it better have a happy ending or I'll sick my watchdog on you. You know, maybe I should give him a name some time. lol. Frank! Anyway, update soon.

Kat's Paw
person Random Kyuubi
schedule October 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
O__O Odd!! Poor Odd...T__T Mean Jim. *Shoots Jim*Sadness. Continue!!!! I think Odd and Ulrich should get together, since there's a serious lack of Odd/Ulrich fanfiction, but hey, I'm just a yaoi fangirl. Even though Odd needs some serious Ulrich cuddling right now. Anyway, I'll be happy as long as Odd doesn't get paired with Yumi or Sissy or someone icky-ish like that. *Shivers* Update, so I don't die from angst shortage.
person Odd's gurl
schedule September 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Not bad... Really angsty just the way I like it! Hope the next chapter has the others though.