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for Last Chance

by ShadowSlayer

schedule January 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story really is great! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEEEAAASSSEEE UPDATE SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOON!!!
person papermaster
schedule December 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I loved the new chapter, and i hope Ulrick gets out of it ok.Cant wait until the next chapter.
person Dustin
schedule December 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh no Ulrich I hope the police get there..... I must say you did leave the story at a good cliff hanger cause you have no idea how far it's going to go... I'm very pleased with your work please continue and soon.
person Lin-Lang
schedule December 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ooooooooooooooooooo!!! Awsome story!!! Great sex scenes, very wonderful description of the character's feelings!!! I loved it!!! It is one of the best stories i've read so far!!!
person Effacer
schedule December 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You've done it again. I simply can't wait to read more! I was looking forward to this story being updated all Christmas vacation, and now I'm happy! Your slash rocks, doll! Seems like Ulrich's in deep shit now, heeheh...

Guess who I am! *evil grin* It's okay if you don't wanna have my babies.

You'd better update, because I want to read more and if I don't I'll go ballistic!
person jared wolfe
schedule December 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
when you reread it,it is even better the second time around.
person Kat\'s Paw
schedule December 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed this chapter. Ulrich and Odd make the cutest couple. I can't wait to see them 'together'. I'm also wondering what they're gonna do to Jim. And remember to update very very soon or Frank'll be having an early christmas dinner with you as the main course.

Kat's Paw

PS: Merry Christmas!
person Anon
schedule December 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
pretty good hoping to see chapter 5 UPDATE IT
person jared wolfe
schedule December 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It was a good story.It had a great plot and story line.I do very much do another chapter because i want to know what is going to happen to Jim andOdd.Thanks for the story
person jared wolfe
schedule December 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
PS. if you do up date this story please notify me when it is up dated.