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January 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that's one descriptive rape scene. I liked it. Very well written. I can't wait to read the next chapter.
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January 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aww, I'm gonna cry. That is so sad. Wonderful description of the emotions and everything. I love how his friends reacted to his 'disapearance' as well. It's not like they automaticly knew there was something wrong. Very realistic!
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January 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
And the truth comes out! I wonder how Ulrich will react to that. I'd probably freak out and hunt the guy down and kill em. Poor Odd. Great description as usual. I love how you express their feelings.
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January 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was so sweet! Too bad they were disrupted. Good description as usual. Great chapter. Can't wait to read the next one.
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January 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I agree completely with Odd. What in the world is Ulrich thinking! Poor Ulrich. I hope help gets there in time. Great chapter, great detail.
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January 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Evil Xana. Poor Ulrich. I'm gonna cry. This was so well written. I like the way you have Ulrich and Odd react differently during their 'experiences'. It's very good.
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January 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I forgot to meantion that you better update soon! I just loved this story and can't wait to read more of it. You are an excellent writer.
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January 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This one ROCKED!!!! Just like the rest keep up the good work.... You get a Golden Star Sticker one more and you get a cookie.
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January 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very good!
5 out of 5!
5 out of 5!
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January 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yes! You updated again! But this time, I'll give you an F...
For fantastic, duh! Everything is so planned out... I knew XANA had to do something with this. Golly darn, I hope Ulrich gets out of this alright, though he's been asking for it. I got so happy when I saw you update again... yay!
Though I have a question: is XANA controlling Jim or the door lock? I'm pretty sure that even Jim isn't that inherently evil. Oh well. More plot for me, then!
For fantastic, duh! Everything is so planned out... I knew XANA had to do something with this. Golly darn, I hope Ulrich gets out of this alright, though he's been asking for it. I got so happy when I saw you update again... yay!
Though I have a question: is XANA controlling Jim or the door lock? I'm pretty sure that even Jim isn't that inherently evil. Oh well. More plot for me, then!