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for Last Chance

by ShadowSlayer

person kev
schedule February 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was so touching, i hate Jim, he's such a bastard. i hope he does get the death sentence. please write another story, i love your stories. check mine out its called Relationships, Feelings and the real Kadic JH.
person Dustin
schedule February 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hmm... Very well done like always kudos to you. Nice way to end that "problem"
person GTAlaince
schedule February 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey dont take this rong but Ulrich and Odd. I like Ulrich and Odd fics but this was so (how do i put it) well written i just don't see why you made it a U/O fic. I love this fic and the way you wrote it. I was so into this fic right before Odd told Ulrich what happed i was like Ulrich don't give up on him give him a huge let him know that you care and love him. But i did't know that you meant love love but it is your fic but with out a dought this is a 5 ***** fic
person Lee
schedule February 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awesome! Please don't let that be the end! This is an awesome story!
person Kat\'s Paw
schedule February 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Go principle person! Finally that jerks been put in his place. Too bad Ulrich had already gotten hurt by then. I can't wait to see what happens next. I want to see some Ulrich/Odd.

Kat's Paw
person Anon
schedule February 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
bout time you actually updated
person papermaster
schedule February 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love it. Its perfect and i hope jim gets what he deserves. But i still think there could be more to it.
person sirhcnotlih
schedule February 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YAHOO!

YOU KICKED JIM'S ASS!

And it was on my birthday!

5 out of 5!

Is that the end though?
person Sashs
schedule January 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awesome! This is so good! You must continue!
schedule January 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another fantastic Chapter! Poor poor poor Ulrich! *Kicks Jim in the head* Evil evil man! *Flames you in order to help with the Jim roasting*