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October 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I still can't believe I haven't reviewed this story.I think
I've read it like five times or something like that.
Very very nice.For some reason,i'm interested in rape
fics.And I read dolly's review:dude,flamers only encourage
people to write more.The flames are there to tell
a writer what he or she has done wrong so they
can use that to fix it.Very disrespectful,bitch.And
what the hell does how she has it on the computer
have anything to do with it?Seriously,I love the story though.
I'm going to flame you to help roast Jim over an open fire.
You should write a sequel to this about how Jim breaks
out of jail and returns to get revenge!!By the way,i'm twelve years old.
I've read it like five times or something like that.
Very very nice.For some reason,i'm interested in rape
fics.And I read dolly's review:dude,flamers only encourage
people to write more.The flames are there to tell
a writer what he or she has done wrong so they
can use that to fix it.Very disrespectful,bitch.And
what the hell does how she has it on the computer
have anything to do with it?Seriously,I love the story though.
I'm going to flame you to help roast Jim over an open fire.
You should write a sequel to this about how Jim breaks
out of jail and returns to get revenge!!By the way,i'm twelve years old.
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September 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
nice i loved it
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August 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I just couldn't handle Ulrich getting raped, I think reading through Odd's was enough, but wow, what a fic. It's not the end...
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July 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very well-constructed, with a use of suspense and drama I generally don't see in these stories. The parts involving the police showed particular care. I'm assuming there will be a Chapter 8? I'll check back for it.
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July 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
excellently written. poor odd...and ulrich... i'm glad that this was a serious fic ^^;
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April 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I would have to agree with dolly about the use of FF.net reviews, thats not a good idea.
However, the story is good and you really should continue it.
However, the story is good and you really should continue it.
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April 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
well i guess your not righting more
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March 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey this was a great story!!!
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March 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Erm.... why did you stick all the FanFiction.net reviews up in here? Compared to this AdultFanFiction.net version, they're two completely different stories in terms of detail and scenes.
The story's great, but I wish you'd update more often. You don't have to wait for reviews until you update, because if you write it, they will come.
The story's great, but I wish you'd update more often. You don't have to wait for reviews until you update, because if you write it, they will come.
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March 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow! that is so sad, but I love the pairing. Please write more stories and never give up