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I absolutely adore this C:

After reading this story twice, I must applaud you. I really wanted to kick Jim for what he did, but he got what was coming to him. Angsty!Odd really is hard to write, because it's so out of character for him, but I think you managed wonderfully, and Ulrich... Ulrich is Ulrich. I ventured into this section looking for Yumi x Ulrich, actually, but I'm glad I looked into this, because I've found a rare gem.

I just have a few minor issues. What part, exactly, did Xana play in all this? Did he manipulate Jim into his actions, or did he happen upon a good opportunity and take it? And after, we didn't even see at least Yumi and Jeremie going to Lyoko to deactivate a tower, because surely Xana would have had to activate a tower in order to lock Yumi and Jeremie in.

Also, jumping POVs is quite... wonky. One to another to another... it just sounds unwieldy. It worked out fine in this, after I understood, but I was confused for just a moment when you switched from first to third. So, perhaps a bit of warning would be nice.

All in all, this story is very good. I've bookmarked it and plan to visit again in the near future.

Awww..I really liked that. It seems that it's so hard to find a good yaoi Code Lyoko story! ^-^ Thanks for uploading this!

<3 I'm in Bishie Heaven

Cool, great ending to this story. So, when you said it was only the beginning, does that mean you will write a sequel? Cause I do have an Idea.

This has got to be one of the most well written stories I have ever read! I could go on but there is no need to!

Keep writing!

A 10 out of 10
10/10

Sincerely,
The Reviewer

this is really good!

*feels embarassed that she hasn't reveiwed.* Erm... I've been reading this story since almost the beginning, and I must say that I love it. I agree with one of the reveiws about a sequel with Jim coming back for revenge. That'd be great. If you like, before you post anything else on ff.net or aff.net, you can send it to me via e-mail and I could beta it for you. But that's only if you want. Otherwise, don't give up. I'll continue reading so long as you continue posting.

Crystal Adept

(Heh heh heh... look... I was actually logged in for a reveiw. lol.)

Just wondering man but, are you ok? I really enjoyed this fic nut if you wanna be a dick and tell everyone off, go ahead, but the next time you even write something, you better watch out.

Dude, who the hell is NemuX? O_o

Sirchnotlih: I think someone hacked the account or took advantage of a glitch, that is not the author as for chapter 8 the author changes to NemuX and is not Shadowslayer.

sounds fun, lol! well, at least you updated. :-)