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I seriously feel like crying right now. that was disturbing, but so well written to make me feel horror, sickness, anger, despair, and extreme sadness for Ron. Well done so far! Please update!

*thinks Ron's parents aren't THAT absent-minded*

Hi!

To be honest I´m quite speechless right now. This is one of the most brutal and saddest Fics I´ve ever read, because you wrote it in a very realistic way. I could imagine all the things, it was like a movie being played in my head. I love Ron and to see how he´s hurt so much is really sad. The pour one... ;___;
I´d like to read another chapter as well, but *please* don´t set up an happy ending with an "everything-is-so-great"-atmosphere!
Writing rape means an amount of responsibility. When you let a character be raped once, he will never´be the same again. But I read a lot of fan fics with characters being raped in one chapter and enjoing to have sex in the next- and this is more than unrealistic.
Okay, I hope you see my point XD

Bye,

Tsumi

I realy loved it.Poor Ron.Damn those bastards.Well i hope you do another chapter,and if you do please e-mail me about it.Thanks.

Oh...My...GOD! Tat wuz so messed up! Ron did not deserve tat!!!!!! I seriously thought tat they would do tat to Kim instead. No one deserves tat. tat wuz unexpected. and Shego and Drakken to be their saviors and being tat understanding, not impossible but unexpecting from them. plz update!!!

*~ Jiyuu no Megami

Ohhhhh this is good. PLEASE give us another chapter!

omg i am crying ;-; that was ultra ultra sad, i think u are pretty much done with this but u can still idk make a "healing" chapter or somthing, its a great plot don't end it

That was very, very disturbingt got good and well written. You did a great job of discribing such an uncomfortable situation. Everyone's reaction was believable. I was quite suprised at who the rescuers were! Keep up the good work.

Wow....a very well-written fic. Horrifying, mesmerizing, and disturbingly within the realm of possibilty (well, if KP weren't a Disney cartoon, and belonged to anime). The characters' reactions are very much the way I would expect them to be if this were real life, and I hope that this is updated soon. I will be checking back.