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for Screams in the Dark

by Ria

person P.C.
schedule June 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice chapter! I like how you wrote the way Shego and Drakken met.o^_^o It was sad of course, but I like that Drakken came to her rescue...even though she didn't need it.
I can't wait to see what happens to Kim and Ron in the next chapter!
person Emi
schedule June 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow... I just read the whole thing... and well... poor ron is all i really have to say...
person P.C.
schedule June 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a really great story! For some reason, I like male rape so I really like this. The only problem I have is that Drakken & Shego are WAY too ooc. Please please PLEASE update this soon!
person e.j
schedule June 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
poor ron...i can't beleive that he was raped...n poor kim too...i'm quite surprised dat shego n drakken helped...mayb someday they'll turn into da good guys...wonder what will the stoppables n possibles reactions b when they learned about what happen 2 ron...anyway keep up the good work...hope u'll updated it soon...
person Rai
schedule May 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
very nice job. im not a big fan of kim posisble, but this was really good.
i cant wait for the next one.
person Buritani
schedule May 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ooooh, you left us on a cliffhanger, clever, the suspense is building
I think it's cool how shego and Drakken are being nice to them, but I was wondering, maybe, in the next chapter, could you have a little information showing why they are being nice to Kim and Ron?
person Classic Cowboy
schedule May 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow, I didn't think this would be updated. this is a very dramatic piece, especially on a site that's known best for pointless smut. I'm liking this so far and I hope you update again soon
schedule May 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I hope those rapists die!
A very intuitive third chapter. Drakken and Shego should at least consider going into offering their services for councilling Ron and Kim indeed (Sue me I am a sucker for Shego/Ron/ Kim/Ron situations and good old fasioned H/C romance)

I look forward to more
The dark depraved lemming
BrianDarksoul(No I am not a smuirf or Barney)
person Buritani
schedule May 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh my god! poor Ron! what they did to him was horrible! I think it's so kawaii that Kim cares about him so much though, and that Shego and Drakken are helping them, I'm really interested in seeing what happens next.
person Crumbobulus
schedule April 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I have to admit that this was one of the most orginal things that I've read on this site. It was really sad about Ron and how he's tramatized (can't spell...) and all... He's even scared of his own name. Good Job...