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Oh hell no. He did NOT just do that. After that I wouldn't even let Ron go back home, parents or not, that is NO way to treat the situation. Hopefully Mrs. Stoppable will be more rational.

*Sharpening a rust encrusted butchers knife determinedlly*
Oh don't mind me...I'm harmless
*The knife Bears the name Ron's Dad*

Trust me...Toatally Harmless..Yesssss I'm in my HAPPY PLACE NOW MOMMY!

*witches can be seen upon Brian's brow*
An I shall Send Ron's Dad into a HAPPY PLACE now to
*Laughs in a lost sick kind of way*

HAPPY HAPPY JOY JOY I'M GUNNA KILL RON'S FATHERS ARROGANCE LOOK MAAA NO HANDS!



*Breathes deeply*

Sorry I am just a TAD emotional Forgive me ok?

a good well thought out chapter. as you can guess I am NOT liking Ron's dad at the moment

WOW. Just, WOW. This is an absolutely awesome story that held me transfixed. Fantastic, please continue it soon.

Sorry ot took so long to reviwew!

Loved this chapter!

The way you write Drakken and Shego is very, very good.

Please, keep it up!


Oh - and btw, I just have one small question... is this going to be a M/F fic, or a M/M, F/F fic? Either works, just curious! lol!

I was a victim of a violent rape at age 14. Rape stories aren't generally my fortee, but this one is an exception. You're addressing alot of issues that not many people touch, and you're doing an excellent job of it. I am intrested to see how much of the aftermath you deal with. This is a very well written story with a good plot and very realistic reactions. Definatly a story for survivors, so far. Can't wait to read more.


CK

update soon, i wanna know what happens next

I ment WOW as in "Wow that was so good i don't have nething 2 say." Keep going! can u e-mail me when you update? horselover1313@cox.net Thanks! ^^ (This chapter was really good 2- i loved how u made D and Shego meet)

I've read this story so far and I can't exactly say I like it but they way you write it. You've done a great job. I just have such a hatred towards rape and the thing they just did to Ron I....this makes me wonder why people do this but I know the answer just can't help to keep asking it. I'm glad that there is someone there for Kim and Ron and I never really thought Shego and Drakken as such villians and please do write more and update more. I'd love to read more though I do hope the rapist get rightly served justice.

Lady Jolly

:D I was frequently checking back, then I lost computer access for a while...still, glad to see you'd posted two more chapters since my last visit. Great work as usual.

I'm just glad that Ron is getting help as well as kim.
Myself I have YET to write a Ron/Shego, ther muse and plot bunnies for that ship havent bashed me in the head and demanded to write.
Howevber certain anceint grek gods have, and let me tell you it'sd driving me nutso. So many fandom muses nipping into my psyche demanding this that and the other it's rediculous....

Anyhow....... A most enigmatic chapter I could actually feel the humanity within Drew as he was indeed showing his most sterling traits as a human being in this one, Serious Dedicated and straight to the point of bliuntness. Seldom has this trait of Drews shone and not as brightlly as now
I am proud to have read this story in it's fourth chapter. I wait for more paitentlly(Just for reference I don't CONDONE trape, even if my stories seem like that. It's fanfiction for a reason not fanfact, if it was People would be running from me and muttring about the crazy dark minded redhead near psycho walking up the street)

I wish you well in your stories and will continue reading, Just gimmie a buzz when you write a H/C R/S fuic I need my Rongo!(Ron/Shego) authors on ffn got me Hooked on Rongo and Ron/Bonnie and Beast-Boy/ Raven fanfics *Sighs and trudges back into dream filled fantasies of Shinji Ikari/Rei Ayanami*