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October 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You are probably the second person who done something like this and done a good job of doing it. I can't wait to see how things go between heros and villians.
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October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I've never really liked Ron's parents... *scowl*
It's really good, though. You had me tearing up at some points. Poor Ron... Poor Kim, too. Blaming herself for everything.
It's nice to know that Shego and Drakken can put aside differences to help the teens-- but maybe that's just because they went through something similar. I dunno. It's just comforting.
Please, write more. Please, please, please!
It's really good, though. You had me tearing up at some points. Poor Ron... Poor Kim, too. Blaming herself for everything.
It's nice to know that Shego and Drakken can put aside differences to help the teens-- but maybe that's just because they went through something similar. I dunno. It's just comforting.
Please, write more. Please, please, please!
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October 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The rape part was very graphic, my stomach turned.
OOOOOOHHHHHHH
mr. stoppable is so damn thick headed he wont even listn'. that's fucked up
This chapter made me realise how glad i am that i can talk with me mum, dad, grandpa, aunt, and uncle... even my friends.
Also they listn' when they hear that i might be hurt, i remembered when i fractured my arm.
please let me know when you update.
OOOOOOHHHHHHH
mr. stoppable is so damn thick headed he wont even listn'. that's fucked up
This chapter made me realise how glad i am that i can talk with me mum, dad, grandpa, aunt, and uncle... even my friends.
Also they listn' when they hear that i might be hurt, i remembered when i fractured my arm.
please let me know when you update.
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October 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice work as usual, though I'm not sure about the reaction from Ron's parents....still *shrugs* people get weird when their lives get turned upside down from tragedy.
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October 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
how the hell can ron;s father be such an asshole?
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September 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That....what a damn bastard!!!!!!!! I hate him. How can ohhhh my gosh I can't believe that man!!!! What a jack ass anyways you've writen this story so well!! and it's so sadly realistic (it's sad that it actually happend is the world). I usually really avoid rape stories and even now I still avoid them but i read yours because well I'm not sure why I do read it but it has helped me understand somethings. And keep going I hope there will be more soon
Lady Jolly
Lady Jolly
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September 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I have to admit I was kinda skeptical that a fanfic about a cartoon could be anything but lame; but man, this one was really well written and realistic. I hate that Ron's parents reacted they way they did, but I guess a lot of people react that way to male rape, and rape in general. I hope Kim's parents will be there for him. I can't wait for more chapters to be written.
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September 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sad chapter...I thought Kim's conversation with her parents wasn't very emotional. I think you should've put a little more detail in her conversation.
I like how you made Ron's parents(or his father) unemotional towards his rape. It makes it more angsty for future chapters.
I like how you made Ron's parents(or his father) unemotional towards his rape. It makes it more angsty for future chapters.
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September 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow... you answered all those reviews... you don't have to answer this or anything though... ;-)
This story has been a favorite of mine for a while, because its so interesting. I have to admit that the first thing I thought of while reading that chapter was my friends dads reaction to my friend being gay. The dad actually woke my friend up and yelled at him "I've given you pleanty of time to turn stop being gay!" The point being, most people aren't very open to gay situations, even forced ones...
This story has been a favorite of mine for a while, because its so interesting. I have to admit that the first thing I thought of while reading that chapter was my friends dads reaction to my friend being gay. The dad actually woke my friend up and yelled at him "I've given you pleanty of time to turn stop being gay!" The point being, most people aren't very open to gay situations, even forced ones...
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September 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thx 4 e-mailing me! good chapter- but his dad really iz an asshole, God he's more of a fucker than anything else!!!!! update soon kay'?