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for Screams in the Dark

by Ria

person firelarc
schedule August 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
im glad you are bringing this subject to light. i mean some people make guys being raped to be their fault it aint. no one wishes to be raped. its the very definition of rape that proves it. You are right about how many guys feel too ashamed to report or its too late. i have a good freind along time ago who went through some stuff. you said before one of the chapters about you dealing with some stuff. im sorry. if you need to vent just email me.
person RI100014
schedule September 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is true adult piece, something so real that makes you understand fully all the darkness and horror that this world can offer. Its sickening beyond reason, yet you can't help but watch as it unfurls, never taking your eyes off the disgusting act for reason you can't explain. I'm not sure to thank you for such an outstandingly revolting piece or hate you for putting together something so....bluntly honest.

person Robert
schedule September 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh my fucking God!!

Reading the reaction from Ron's father. AHHHHH!! I wanted to beat his skull in, that son of bitch is more worried about his own god damn fucking masculity then his son who's been rapped and humilated. I understand where he's coming from but god damn it your love and concern for your son should come first you fucking bastard!

I hope you continue with this. It's really good and so far has captured alot of the realistic pain and suffering rape brings not only to the victim but everyone who cares for them. Kim's gonna go through hell, the feeling of helplessness, the humilation, the guilt is gonna eat her from the inside. She needs her family more than anything because as selfish as it might seem, Ron needs her more than anyone right now. He's family is too disconnected from him to give the level of support he'll NEED to face the nightmare of living through the rape.

Eagerly awaiting your next update.
person Haywire_Hakaze
schedule July 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Been waiting on an update for a while now; I'm curious to know what happens next. Please, update again soon.
schedule December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow...this fic never fails to amaze me. I couldn't stop reading it, I read all 5 chapters in one go. Thank you so much for the excellent read. You have an amazing way with words, you know how to keep a reader captivated and interested. I'll be anxiously awaiting the next chapter. Thank you again.
schedule December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That chapter was so good, so heartwrenchingly sad. Ron's pain actually made me cry. You're a wonderful author, I'm reading the next chapter now.
person Lettie
schedule November 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, you write very well.
I have always got a soft spot for Ron. And I really like the way you have portrayed him and the others. Especially Kim´s parents. I´m a mother and I felt their pain as she heard about what had happened to the two children.

Keep up the good work!

Love Lettie
person Rai
schedule November 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hm- It urked me that Ron's dad is such an asshole. But great chapter cant wait for the next!
person Cynthia Krenshaw
schedule November 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yeah, it does take a long time to deal with it. It took me a long time. This chapter really struck a cord with me. You did an excellent job of revealing how ignorant some people, especially non chalant parents, can be. It's very well written, and it's got me hooked. I can't wait to read the next chapter.

CK
person Sophie
schedule October 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You must update soon please this is really good so please up date soon