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for Otto's experiment

by rocketdpower

person Sexyboy
schedule October 3, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Otto is sexy
Can i be in the story
person Dissonance
schedule April 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story, you should make one of otto and his father. You'd have to approach it probably in a more suttle manner though.
person Prince Izzy
schedule March 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aw man! That was amazing! Otto/Tito is kinda an odd pairing, but it's something I can really get to enjoy. You need to write more RP slash fics, dude! ^____^ There are plenty of great slash pairings you can work with!
person Jason Raymond
schedule February 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You should make another chapter. Only it should involve Otto, and Sam. Make Otto's dick bigger, and Sam's small as possible. I'll be looking foward to reading that.
By the way, Good job with the first chapter.
person smeagol_Sesshluva
schedule January 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*snorts* that was interesting! hmm...otto/tito? definetly a werid pairing. fucking a fat old man just seems so gross to me!
person kit
schedule September 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Good story. Although I`m a little freaked out. Write one about Otto/Twister
person Unknown26
schedule September 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Good writing, kind of weird with Tito, though. But, overall good.
person ben01
schedule September 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Nice, hope ya update.
person CMS
schedule September 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I dunno...That was just...well, wierd. I could see Otto/Twister or Otto/Lars or even Otto/Sam, but Otto/Tito? The image in my head is very disturbing :) The writing its-self was pretty good though.