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person Holiday
schedule August 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I never saw the original story--I guess it was deleted--so I'm a little lost as to what exactly happened but I just wanted to say that I think this story is really well written.
person Anon
schedule May 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That has to be the best rape scene I've ever read. It was so amazingly realistic, not too dramatic but not the other way around. You are an awesome writer, and you captured Daria's character so well! Good job!

But poor Daria :(
person animechick
schedule April 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
she has to go to the hospitial or police station or domething she can't just
go home and get all depressed
person Anon
schedule February 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Almost (but nowhere near) as bad as an actual rape. To improve the overall quality you should focus more on the emotional and metal side affects of the act instead of the physical.