rate_review Reviews

and like I said, your foray into that is a good one, it does more than just have them together, it explores how life is for them, how they never learned about sex except on their own, how such things can be embarrassing if they don't wear clothes, and how brave heart and proud heart had feelings for each other but proud heart wasn't ready for a relationship and was scared to tell him because she was afraid he would reject her.

I liked how this was both emotional and well done and it has a great ending with the two of them getting together and having good, honest, sex for their first time.

that was a good story, I like how you made this both emotional and arousing and I like that you made this so good. I like how you developed their relationship and I hope to see more of your writing in the future.

This is so sweet. Five stars!

Wow...for a Care Bears fic, that was pretty damn good!

XD

I really enjoyed this story; I'm a big Care bears fan, and it's great to see a good fic, with a good plot, in good writing. Truly a masterpiece.
Thanks for writing

"and he had almost had a serious social disaster when his penis began to swell"
Oh my god.
I think I love you.

Simply a great story. A pleasure to read and a fresh break from mindless, meaningless, random fuck fics. Hope that you continue writing, whatever you wish, you have a talent for it. Would like to see how this story progresses.

this is brilliant! I am scarred for life but what a fic! well done!

hoo seo see more!

Adoreable and Romantic, I hope you continue this series cause it's just a really nice read.

Good luck!

Wow, poor BraveHeart. No one should fret over something so natural, it only causes mentaly instablilities. I think there should be another chapter where he learns this...and maybe a love triangle with one of the other CBs or CBCs!!! *hysteric giggles*