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by WildKat

person Cold-Chaos
schedule April 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Man, this is a good story and well writen. If you did continue this maybe the seting should be at school! Maybe one of kims friends finds out! You know, eather Bonnie, Tara of Monique?!
person Iko-baby
schedule March 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was fucking awesome.lol.Great job!
person hmmm
schedule December 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
you're missing a part of the sotry...
person hmmm
schedule December 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
you're missing a part of the sotry...
person Eddie
schedule October 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
great job on you you should write another
person Emeraldfire
schedule October 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great smut!!! I loved the first one and this one even more! It's going to be hard to watch KP with my kids and not think naughty thoughts about KP and RP. I started reading just out of morbid curiosity. I have to admit, I really enjoyed it.
person Anon
schedule September 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well now, I should stop by here more often...last time I was here there were just two or three stories, now theres fourteen, two of which I enjoyed. Btw, you wrote both, it was quite easy for me to put aside all my questions and loose myself in the flow of the story. (Interesting conecpt of the play rape...I agree, Kim doesm thm the Dominatrix type don't she.)
Anyway, good job on both stories...bravo. Keep up the good work and all that.
person Silver
schedule August 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed this story,
and I liked how you ended it,
It was very nice,
and in chter ter to,
well, I mean, as in character as is possible when they are having sex,
okay shutting up now,
point is,
I loved this story
person Ceaseless Cloudy Days
schedule August 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hahaha. That was still hilarious. I can't imagine Ron doing that...I mean, it's more easier to imagine Kim making the demands around Ron. Still, I loved it. It was definitely worth reading at 3:30 in the morning. XD