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January 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Another goodun and you can't hate on the sappy ending sometimes it's all good and just what's needed from time to time.
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October 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yeah you can say the ending was sappy and too romantic blah blah blah.... But after the hot control sex they shared it was pretty good to get back to the point that even during all the dominatrix stuff, they shared alot of trust and compassion for each other's feelings. That's love for ya. Thanks for sharing.
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July 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
how can you say that the end of that story was sappy? romance is the best!
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November 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I must admit that the story had a very sweet ending :).
Honestly, it's pretty hard to imagine Ron acting that way, but it's interesting .
Good job :D.
Honestly, it's pretty hard to imagine Ron acting that way, but it's interesting .
Good job :D.
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October 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
a good sequal to an excellent story, the end got a bit sappy, but otherwise enjoyable
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October 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
what was wrong with the ending i liked it... i liked the story too hehe, but anyway i loved you stories, both of em', and i hope to see more in the future, =}
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September 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good job. Nice use of the characters and sappy works for Diseny let it work for you, too.
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June 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Not bad not bad at all, I was very impressed
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May 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I decided to review both your stories, since they go together. they were both awesome! the 'punishment' and 'revenge' was hilarious!
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April 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW!!!!!!! THAT IS SO HOT!!!!!!