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October 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that was great i see great potental in you.
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September 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is pretty good. I really like the first chap Not Not really sure why though. *Shrugs* An, go, god job.
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August 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It's good but you need to get descriptive
it was all thrown together but a good story none the leass
write another J/A and be a little more descriptive and stuff
it was all thrown together but a good story none the leass
write another J/A and be a little more descriptive and stuff
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August 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I liked it. There aren't that many of this show's so it's good. Definately make one between Yumi and either Ulrich or Odd(sp?).
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August 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
make a chapter of Yumi and Ulrich confessing their love then making it ...
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August 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It was good but it could of been better this story was pretty much skin and bones with hardly any detail
other than that its a fine story look forward to more
other than that its a fine story look forward to more
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August 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Make a longer more intense chapter with Ulrich and Yumi in it
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August 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wrong, but good Code Lyoko hentai eh? hmm... I wish I could write a good hentai/lemon fivc, but no I sucj at it, Oh well cool story.
~Kouji
~Kouji
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August 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great, I would love it if you added a Yumi/Ulrich chapter.
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August 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hmm...not bad. Very good, actually. Please write another fic with Yumi and Ulrich. I'm very interested since I can't seem to find decent fics like this one. Oh, and I'm sure other people will post fics since this section has just been added. Later, ace; see you around!