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July 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey Jayman, it's great to see you here at AFF - much less restrictive on the stories, aren't they? :)
Well, your fic was great the first time around, wit without the limitations of an R rating placed upon it, I'm sure tha tthis time will be even better. Well, now I'm gonna go read chapter 2 - and you're right, his opening monologue (I wonder, what's the diff between a monologue and a soliloquy? ....sorry, went off on a tangent there) IS really disturbing. But of course, being mad, he thinks he's perfectly sane. See you at chapter 2.
Well, your fic was great the first time around, wit without the limitations of an R rating placed upon it, I'm sure tha tthis time will be even better. Well, now I'm gonna go read chapter 2 - and you're right, his opening monologue (I wonder, what's the diff between a monologue and a soliloquy? ....sorry, went off on a tangent there) IS really disturbing. But of course, being mad, he thinks he's perfectly sane. See you at chapter 2.
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July 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Am I right in thinking that with the increase in rating that this time around the descriptions are gonna be much more graphic, Jayman? And if you do make alterations from the first version that was on FFNet, would you want to keep the original on my site, or update it, or something?