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March 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
awww she was so cute as a baby
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September 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I don't know, andrea.....I thought it was all surrealistic.
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August 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
personally i think this story would make a good movie. this story to me sounds very painful. but it was still a good story.
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August 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
not bad...the baby part was kinda creepy tho.
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August 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
can't wait for more,please update as soon as possible
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July 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I get that this is from Brittanies point of view, but that doesn't mean the grammer has to be bad.
This looks a g a good fic if you can make it easier to follow, just read through it again, and separate the text into paragraphs, and desc Bri Brittanies feelings in greater detail, because it feels rushed in parts.
This looks a g a good fic if you can make it easier to follow, just read through it again, and separate the text into paragraphs, and desc Bri Brittanies feelings in greater detail, because it feels rushed in parts.