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September 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is my favorite Ed, Edd, and Eddy story! ^_^ Great job! You made the Eds all perfectly in character, which few writers are able to do. Any chance of another chapter?
Keep up the good work!
-GoddessWashu
queenoftheramen@gmail.com
Keep up the good work!
-GoddessWashu
queenoftheramen@gmail.com
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September 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hey, great story! loved that ed was a big part & the scennes with edd an eddy were hot! write more stories!
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September 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
dude that fuckin rocked i like the ending where ed just walks in on them, it's cool how he leaves them alone. this was great.
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June 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ghosty here, reviewing one of her favorite stories and wondering: 'When will Inner-Ed get another chapter? Will Mysticlynx write more Edd/Eddy sweetness when Inner-Ed is done? Does Mysticlynx know how much I love this story?'
No, you say? She doesn't? Well then let me tell her.
I reread this story all the time. The premise is original and ingenious, the characters are well-drawn-out and on-the-nose, and the romance is both completely hot and terribly, terribly sweet. I new new favorite lines and favorite parts every time I read, though I still love the simple beauty of that one statement: "Take me." The way Edd said it... Everything that proceeded it and followed it was perfect, too, but that, and the ending, where Double D explains to Eddy why he knows it worked, are still my favorities... And the way Eddy just pulled away, the way you described it... I'm just in love with all of this, I really am. And I thought you should know.
And I miss you, d*mmit!!!
~Ghosty
Ed: "One is a lonely number, Double D."
*sob*
No, you say? She doesn't? Well then let me tell her.
I reread this story all the time. The premise is original and ingenious, the characters are well-drawn-out and on-the-nose, and the romance is both completely hot and terribly, terribly sweet. I new new favorite lines and favorite parts every time I read, though I still love the simple beauty of that one statement: "Take me." The way Edd said it... Everything that proceeded it and followed it was perfect, too, but that, and the ending, where Double D explains to Eddy why he knows it worked, are still my favorities... And the way Eddy just pulled away, the way you described it... I'm just in love with all of this, I really am. And I thought you should know.
And I miss you, d*mmit!!!
~Ghosty
Ed: "One is a lonely number, Double D."
*sob*
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May 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
come on continue the story its too good to stop!!!