rate_review Reviews

You smurfing smurf! How dare you smurf with smurfett behind my smurf! I should smurf you one of these days!

No seriously, this can't be serious! Please say it isn't so!

Can we expect a scene like the following in the future?

"I smurfed as he smurfed my smurf, smurfing with slow smurfs and making me smurf louder. I felt his smurf on my smurf and it just made me want to smurf."

Please? Come on. You know you want to.

Oi. I know this story was written last year and there's not much chance that it will be continued, but I just wanted to post this review to say how much I enjoyed it. It's just long enough to make a nice snapshot of the relationship - even though I'd love to read more I think it stands well on its own. I don't think I've ever read any other smurf story that wasn't a complete satire and/or just kinky porn (not that I'd ever turn down kinky porn, or satire for that matter). It was nice to come across something that was so well-written, something that took itself and its subject matter seriously. There were a few odd typos but otherwise I was very impressed. I read a lot of fanfiction and I don't come across gems like this one every day.

FINALLY!!! Someone else wrote another Smurf fic!!! BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!
...Ok...
I loved it and can't wait for chpter 3!!!

*skips off humming the Smurf Theme*

Woah, whowould have thought those two...hmmm.
I'm highly interested and you can't have Clumsy die! NO!
Also, I COMMAND YOU TO WRITE THE NEXT CHAPTER!
AS YOUR PRINCESS, I COMMAND IT!!!

*sits on her throne and w8s for chpt 3*