rate_review Reviews

Cool. I like the way you write in third person; I myself find it difficult to write and read stories like that. However, yours is realllly good so far. :D Can't wait to read more.

Quite an intersting scenario you have there. Edd the whore...not the most appealing image, but, considering his home life, not at all unbelievable. It was interesting trying to guess the characters, and, if I had any criticisms at all for this fic, I'd say it would have been interesting if each sex scene were prolonged as to give the reader a chance to guess the character. But, that's not really the point, is it? You kinda threw me for a loop with Jonny, (how the hell did that piece of wood fit in there?) but, I know that there are other fics with Jonny and Plank out there. Jimmy wasn't too surprising, he always seemed like quite the lil sadist to me. Rolf acts like his animals, therefore he makes love like his animals, makes sense to me. And with Kevin, to me it seems like he'd wan be be in charge in bed, hence disallowing Double-D to move. All in all quite an enjoyable fic, although I prefer the romance genre. Kudos to you!

Sarah

Save the Eds, indeed.

awww sad and angsty i laughed when i read about the plank part though good though