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July 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is so cool, u need to due some more. Maybe on the twins or milhouse or the other classmates and teachers..!
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July 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
do bart and milhouse!
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July 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
dear davidplant,
this story was........interesting we liked most of it. we think it would of been better if u had bart and homer as a couple and marge and lisa as a couple. also lisa did everything to bart but bart didnt do anything to lisa. hope u make a chapter 2 we'll read it if u do. good job is all we have to say! see ya! email us back please!
this story was........interesting we liked most of it. we think it would of been better if u had bart and homer as a couple and marge and lisa as a couple. also lisa did everything to bart but bart didnt do anything to lisa. hope u make a chapter 2 we'll read it if u do. good job is all we have to say! see ya! email us back please!
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July 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Please please continue on this fic..... its really wicked!!
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June 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
good
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June 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
good so far hope you keep going! one question though are bart and lisa 10 and 8 or are they a few years older?
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April 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
the formatting wasn't so good... but aside from that, it actually wasn't too bad. i wouldn't mind reading more of it (if there is anymore)
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April 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It's pretty unreadable as currently written, with tons of material jammed into a handful of paragraphs... your keyboard *does* have an "Enter" key you know.