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by GhostHelwig

schedule August 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Quiet the life destroying effects nonconcentual-sex will have on a person.Your story has expanded my mind to the passion shared by those in the role of victims.
person Skull
schedule November 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I am proud of another great writer!

I only give this personal honor to the writers that can shape a story into an emotional recovery and can make me shed my Neutral shell and give sadness. This is also a good fic thanks to the fact that Edd was the Narrator I only read these stories like Gone on the Fourth of July if you have not read it yet you should if it can bring me emotion it's good by my count.

Skull J. Darkmaster-"If you can break down the shell of a man and make him flow with emotion you have created a miricale"~Quote written By Skull J. Darkamster
person lilvior
schedule November 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
o wow! i'v never read any e,e&e but this was so well written, i like that you chose edd as the pov character, he is the best choice for explaining it. iv often thought in the actual cartoon that they take it too far, but yeesh, that was emotional. well done
person Sakag
schedule June 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I liked it, but it made me feel really sad. Maybe it's because I'm such an emotional person.
person GerudoPrincess
schedule March 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story.
person Acid_Blitzkrieg
schedule December 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow.That's really sad.
I didn't think that girls could rape guys but I guess your right.
person some weird kid
schedule November 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Pure genious. I loved it. It just inspired me to write one.
person Anonymous
schedule November 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I wasn't sure I'd write this at first but I guess that by the very fact that I'm typing means I want to.

The issue of males being stalked, harassed and raped by women is something that, unfortunately, the majority of people are still not taking seriously. This primarily stems from the unacceptable sexist culture society has yet to fully shake off along with false preconceptions about how all males think, the perception often being that practically every strait guy is practically gagging for it the second they hit puberty.

I was only 10-years old I was sexually assaulted by an 11-year old girl, she didn't go as far to rape me though. She had help from her friends to overcome the difference in strength who held me down for her.

Anyway, I just wanted to say that I personally found your story to be a pretty accurate reflection of the kind of feelings people go through during experiences like that.

It's the powerlessness that is the worst thing, to be screaming at the top of your voice and only hear sadistic laughter in return, to realise that in these moments you have been reduced to something less than a human being, to little more than an item of their personal property.

So again, well done and take pride that you've helped heal a few old scars.
person Joey
schedule September 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Okay.That was a........a.......POSITIVELY GREAT STORY.I mean that too,or at least you explained it better than some of the other bakas that come here.Keep up the good work.Maybe you can write one just as good as this one,but all and all,you did good kid.
person DMajorBoss
schedule September 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was one heck of a story: compelling, sad, powerful, and a few other words that describe it that I can't recall at the moment. You wrote an excellent story that really brings out one's feelings. Keep up the good work.