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for Too Far

by GhostHelwig

person Lola
schedule July 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well done! Double D was sensitive without being grotesquely so, and you captured Eddy's tone very well. A touchy subject to write, you did beautifully. ^~
person Mysticlynx
schedule April 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Eddy seemed quite callous in this fic. Not that it's unbelievable, but I always believed in a softer gentler Eddy. This fic nearly made me cry when Edd told Eddy, he could have had him if he hadn't taken him. Beautiful fic! Sorry, this review is so short, but it's quitee ove overe.ere. ^_^;