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for Intruder

by IncoherentThought

person makota
schedule July 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
What a lovely piece of smut.

Though I am an Invader Zim fan, I've never ventured to read the fanfics...this is one of the first I've read for this fandom, and I have to say that I am not dissapointed. Great work and I cheer your dirty mind. Excellent!
person Potassium
schedule April 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
A bit of constructive criticism. I love ZADR like no other pairing, although I like stories where they take time to develop instead of suddenly happening in the matter of minutes. It was also rather hard to read; there were many grammatical and spelling errors. It wasn't in character.