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for Intruder

by IncoherentThought

person Chaos
schedule July 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
'He noted that Zim’s member looked pretty much like a humans besides the fact that it was the same color as the rest of his body, and that he lacked genitals'

if zim lacks genitals, how can his member look like anything?
do you mean testicles?
person 'Nilla
schedule April 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is just delicious. I'm such a fan of the Dib-getting-caught-and-screwed(in many senses)-in-the-base idea. Bookmarking hardcore.
person Keri
schedule July 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
|D~
just
|D~

Oh Zim, you horrible alien bastard.

Zim: That's mah job!
Dib: /still sobbing/ What?! To fuck human boys and then break their hearts and make them OOC and angsty
Zim: Well, duh.

Ha, no, I just kid. I love it. Alot. I really did.
person Kagome
schedule June 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh yeah my fav couple in invader zim (purrs) two thumbs way up!!
person AnnAnime
schedule June 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was Great! please write more.
person Death over Time
schedule May 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
CoNGRatULAtionS

You are the first god on my worship list. You like Yu-Gi-Oh! Congrats.
person sabrina
schedule March 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was really good. i've never read an Invader Zim fanfic before... quite different.
person Harryhollow
schedule December 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is so fucking amazing please could you email me if you update "Intruder" I just need to read more of it!!
p.s. is Zim and dib going to have a baby and for sex "giggles"??
person Ronin S. Oath
schedule November 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This was an awesome story ^_^ I really hope you continue soon! I must hear more! What does the lighter shading of Zim's eyes mean? I must know! I must know or I will explode!
person firecat
schedule August 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow..that was diifrent...ive never read a invader zim one before.. but id say that was pretty good