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person maniac
schedule April 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very good, please write more!

one suggestion I would have is to not post the main story in bold, it hurts some eyes and annoys some readers.
person Unknown26
schedule April 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
more chapters please!
person Smeez
schedule April 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wooaah...very explcit matirial...wouldnt it be funny if the parents walked in on them?
person The lord almighty
schedule April 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
were you actually serious when you wrote this???????? if so...what's wrong with you?