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July 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
HOLY SHIT! Jesus Christ, monkey sex. This is kinda sick on your part. But then again, your all sick bastards. Why is your writing style so good? You should seriously try to lay off the sex and try something else.
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February 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
u gonna udate soon?
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August 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
... mmmhmmm. monkey fucks girl. hmm
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March 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
If you write a second chapter could u e-mail me!! Please make a chapter 2!!!
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December 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Pretty darn good.I'm waiting for chap. 2 .Let' see Donnie have some fun with Debbie.
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December 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow...That's Interesting....Update soon....
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December 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow. i cannot imagine what was going through your head when you thought up this story. word of advice:i think you watch too much television.Just a thought
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August 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is terrific . Please continuethe story.
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April 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You know, I'll be the first to say I've read some disturbing shit, and this, actually, could be disturbing if in the hands of a less gifted writer. There's a way to completely make something like this sick, and you suceeded in writing this very well. I would be interested in seeing where you go with this, although I have no real desire to see Donnie poking at Debbie...creepy...this was done well though.
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April 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Good god...I'm definitely not one to flame, and certainly won't in this case. Well-written, though disturbing.