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January 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Interesting Sammy just was ooc im sorry that is nothing like the sammy i know i could have seen twister acting like that or even otto... but sammy he never is in charge he has leadership and self esteem issues that make him feel that there is always some one better for the job and that his leadership would just get in the way
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June 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this was weird...idk.
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April 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Now that was highly, highly disturbing!! Otto was in on it too!! Reggie shoulda just swam with her underclothes on, regardlof wof what the others would've thought. ><
But then again, I should've expected something like that to happen. ^^;;;
But then again, I should've expected something like that to happen. ^^;;;
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April 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was a very good story! The only recommendations that I have for the next chapter (PLEASE CONTINUE THE STORY!!) are that maybe she could give in to otto and the other boys, and have sex with them on a regular basis. I have been looking for an adult Rocket Power fic for a long time, so thanks!
- - Unknown26
Email me when you get the second chapter up! (y_wiz99@yahoo.com)
- - Unknown26
Email me when you get the second chapter up! (y_wiz99@yahoo.com)
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April 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I have thought of some suggestions for the next chapter(s) since I read and reviewed your story for the first time. First, I think that Reggie should want more of it, since she at least liked the pleasure part of it last time. Second, I think that you should have Otto cum for the first time, while having sex with Reggie. Third, Reggie gets pregnant from Otto and they have to hide it.
These are just suggestions, I'm not trying to tell you what to write!
Thanks again for the great story!
These are just suggestions, I'm not trying to tell you what to write!
Thanks again for the great story!
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April 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
u must put up another chapter!
make her tell on them and make a huge angst thing!
make her tell on them and make a huge angst thing!
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April 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
well written, but you should definetly put in another chapter!
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March 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
it's about time someone posted a RP fic on this site. I liked it a lot, very descriptive. It was a little wierd with Otto sinse that's incest and all, but it was still good. It would have been better if you'd used twister instead of sammy but that's just my opinion. I hope you decide to write another RP fic soon!
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March 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow!!