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April 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE this fic... its one of my two fave Invader Zimfics!!!! KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!
UPDATE! PLEASE! SOON!
Seriously, you’ve written them so in-character that I could believe this story was a continuation of
the show...brilliant!! I love the insults the two give each other. *Grins*
I liked this part in chapter one especially, along with the part just after Dib catches Zim, when
Zim’s in the lab, strapped down and Dib’s trying to think of him as an ‘it’.
( "No!" He yelled. "There has GOT to be some way to reverse it..."
"Negative," The computer replied with a self-suffering sigh.
That apparently wasn't the correct answer. Dib cautiously stuck his head out from behind the tube
and watched as Zim angrily beat his fists against the offending console. "Well TRY HARDER!"
He screamed. "You incompetent useless excuse for a..." He whirled about suddenly, and their
eyes met. Dib froze. It took a moment, but then Dib's presence registered and the Irken's eyes
widened. ) ***One of my two favourite scenes in Chapter one....***
I just LOVE how helpless and sad and scared Zim is in chapter three... Poor Zim... it just makes me want to hold him as well... *sniff* He's such a cute little alien. And Dib, being so concerned and gentle... its touching! Really. I like this story a lot. Its one of my three fave Zimfics.
~StarwolfRealms~
UPDATE! PLEASE! SOON!
Seriously, you’ve written them so in-character that I could believe this story was a continuation of
the show...brilliant!! I love the insults the two give each other. *Grins*
I liked this part in chapter one especially, along with the part just after Dib catches Zim, when
Zim’s in the lab, strapped down and Dib’s trying to think of him as an ‘it’.
( "No!" He yelled. "There has GOT to be some way to reverse it..."
"Negative," The computer replied with a self-suffering sigh.
That apparently wasn't the correct answer. Dib cautiously stuck his head out from behind the tube
and watched as Zim angrily beat his fists against the offending console. "Well TRY HARDER!"
He screamed. "You incompetent useless excuse for a..." He whirled about suddenly, and their
eyes met. Dib froze. It took a moment, but then Dib's presence registered and the Irken's eyes
widened. ) ***One of my two favourite scenes in Chapter one....***
I just LOVE how helpless and sad and scared Zim is in chapter three... Poor Zim... it just makes me want to hold him as well... *sniff* He's such a cute little alien. And Dib, being so concerned and gentle... its touching! Really. I like this story a lot. Its one of my three fave Zimfics.
~StarwolfRealms~
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March 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm assuming there will be more, and I'm anxious to read more! Woooo. Very interesting concept with Zim's body... I was pretty sure that it would be something sexual, but I was definitely on the edge of my seat wondering what the "contaminant" was!
I hope you'll invent some more interesting alien stuff as the story continues ;P I don't know why, but I've always loved seeing the variables people come up with in dealing with Zimmeh <3
I hope you'll invent some more interesting alien stuff as the story continues ;P I don't know why, but I've always loved seeing the variables people come up with in dealing with Zimmeh <3
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March 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I have to say I like this fic. I'm still annoyed with myself for liking Ivader Zim slash lol...but It's still a good read ^^. I hope to see the next chapters soon.
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November 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Are you perhaps aware that a part of the story that was in this chapter before is no longer here? It's gone. You really ought ot think about re-uploading your fic, you know? And maybe finishing it, while you're at it.
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November 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Are you EVER going to finish this? Do you even come to this site anymore? DO YOU KNOW HOW LONG WE'VE ALL BEEN WAITING? HUH? HUH!? Finish the fic or don't write one at all! You drive people insane this way, ya know that!? Well do ya!? HUH!?
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October 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
noo the madness! Its gotten to me! You! Pink fleshy human! why have you not written more of this! why! I need more! MORE! *laughs madly* more! (in other words it was very good and if you feel like it could you pretty please contuine thank you)
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August 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE! PLEASE UPDATE! I NEED TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT! UPDATE AS SOON AS YOU CAN! PLEASE! *on knees begging* PLEASE UPDATE SOON! FOR ME?!?! *puppy dog eyes* PWEASE? PRETTY PLEASE WITH A ZIM ON TOP?!?!?!!? UPDATE FOR ME! WELL I WILL BE WAITING!
LOVE HUGS AND KISSES FROM ONE ZIM LOVER TO ANOTHER,
NICKNACK!^___^! UPDATE!
LOVE HUGS AND KISSES FROM ONE ZIM LOVER TO ANOTHER,
NICKNACK!^___^! UPDATE!
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June 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
...Mmmm, helpless ZIM...
Nice. Re-he-heally nice.
HULK WANT MORE (Grr ^.^)!!!!!!!!!
COME ON!!!!!!! It's mean to leave a girl hangin' like this...
Don't be mean, be my God and finish the story :)
...ZIMMY ZIM ZIM ZIM ZIM ZIM ZIM!!!!!!!!!!!!...Love 'em...
Nice. Re-he-heally nice.
HULK WANT MORE (Grr ^.^)!!!!!!!!!
COME ON!!!!!!! It's mean to leave a girl hangin' like this...
Don't be mean, be my God and finish the story :)
...ZIMMY ZIM ZIM ZIM ZIM ZIM ZIM!!!!!!!!!!!!...Love 'em...
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June 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Finale needs an, er, finale!! You can't just leave things at a cliffhanger like this!! It just started getting good!
I like how Dib is evil in this one (or rather, in character) instead of wimp-ifying. Is he going to try and save Zim from whatever sickness it looks like he's got?
I wantsta SEEEEEE!
I like how Dib is evil in this one (or rather, in character) instead of wimp-ifying. Is he going to try and save Zim from whatever sickness it looks like he's got?
I wantsta SEEEEEE!
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June 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was great!! Excellently written! Please oh please say there's going to be more soon!