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by Spacefille

person Melwyn
schedule August 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Sequel!! I would love to see a sequel to this story.
person SapphieChai
schedule November 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
;; how come you quit writing??? Its so good!
person Krimzon
schedule January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god! : “I WILL triumph,” Zim said haughtily. With that he crawled into the human’s lap and curled up against him, laying his head against Dib’s chest. He smiled to himself as he listened to the sound of Dib’s heart beat. For the first time in months he felt content. With his base back he’d be a whole new alien. His eyes glinted as evil thoughts wove through his head. He could take this planet. PROVE to his tallest, before he killed them of course, that he was worthy. That they had made a huge mistake, by trying to kill him. And after he was done enslaving the human race, he’d take Dib as his own personal sex slave. Make him mate with him time and time again. Oh yes, the idea was very lovely indeed… :

Right there! Right there was PURE BLOODY GREATNESS!!! Holy IRK, you rule like none other monkey! Not only am I glad that you have continued to update, I am overjoyed that your writing style is utterly seemless, and even better! Though, of course, like the perv I truelly am, I would love to read more 'in depth' descroptions of one or tow of those sex scenes, BUT, you have proved time and again that such a thing is not necessary to make a GREAT fic!

Dib's character is just so...real. Perfection. Oh, and GIR again! LOVE how him being without his doggie suit cramps his 'style!' Wonderful, wonderful job on Zim as well. I am still blown away that he is not only alive, but more sane without his PAK.

You have really taken the unmade episodes and made something truely amazing with them. *applaudes* Can't wait to read more from you, you fantasmic person, you!

Your loyal reader,
Krimzon
person Insanity
schedule January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow...I am completely ecstatic to see that you are going on with this story. This is one of my absolute favorite ZADR fics that is out there and to see an actual update on it has me just so happy. I have to admit I was a bit confused as to if chapter ten was the end, but now to see this and see that you are indeed going to go on with it, I just can't wait for everything else you have in store. I'm sure it will be worth the wait :)
person Krimzon
schedule January 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh my word, I cannot beging to describe how incredible this is. First of all, I have to mention the humor. There is just enough of the right kind of...unique Zim humor, and the Gir humpr was VERY well done. Most have a really hard time pulling off his particular brand of insanity. I cannot beleive how you managed to bring such humor into every chapter, and still maintain such drama.

Oh Irk, and the dead smeets...that was really very sad, and I was beyond shocked when Zim's PAK rejected him, and THEN Zim survived! But ooh, I literally shuddered when Zim's eyes fell out....man, that was spooky. Oh my, what else.

Ah yes, I understand perfectly about all the wonderfully bad things that happened to Zim. You have set the plot up INCREDIBLY well. the chapters are lengthy and filled with SUBSTANCE (something I love), and the character's emotions are wonderfully in depth. I adore how Dib, despite his softening feelings for Zim, still acts like an ass on occasion and even tried to convince himelf to just leave Zim. I ADORE how Zim is just so..Zim-like in his relationship with Dib. That little scene in the library was incredibly cute. Garge...there was so very much.

I very truely wish I had been reading this from the beginning so that I could have given the praise you so deserve with every update, and I am incredibly overjoyed that you have kept this story alive, despite the lack of response for the most part. You have a loyal reader now..and prepare to have your story pimped by the me!

Much lurve and respect,
-Krimzon
person Florville
schedule November 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I just wanted to say that this story is incredible...I don't even know where to start in terms of feedback. You've developed the characters expertly, and I've seen in the last chapters that you're pushing the plot forward as well. This is certainly going to live up to the status of an epic. I admire your talent. This may seem like an incredibly short review, but I'm honestly too awed to put my feedback into words. All I can say is: keep writing. Your ability is amazing, and this story promises to be fantastic.

Highest Regards,
Florville
person purpledemonz
schedule October 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a wonderful fic! Please keep writing!
person Tamago
schedule August 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WEEE! The whole time, I was pictureing Zim&Dib, AND the Tallest Red and Purple..... Whats up with that? o.O Teeheehee. 8-10 It would have gotten a ten, but it didn't go into the sex man! Wheres the lurv!? XD If I were Dib, it would be damn hard not to lose it and **** Zims cute lil brains!! WEEEE!!!
person amekan
schedule May 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HI!! I really like the story. I've read it on ff.net, but it wasn't finished. Or was it? Anyway, i really like the plot and I'm just dropping this off as an encouragement. Love ya.
person Suzu_no_miko
schedule April 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful! Sensational! I love this and I hope you'll update soon.