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I will grant you that, technically speaking, it's better than average. Anatomically speaking, it's FAR above average. I mean, I read a writer who though a hymen fell somewhere between the vaginal opening and the cervix. And "hers" (the one in the story) had the sensitivity of a gas chromatograph.

Now, here's the rub. This story doesn't bother me because it's about Smurfs. It bothers me because it DOESN'T.

Apart from the names, and a scanty introduction, this story has as much to do with Smurfs as flaming crosses on someone's lawn have to do with Jesus of Nazareth. Could you NOT have made this thing just a LITTLE more Smurf-specific?

If you're going to write Smurf smut, I would expect that you would make this a little more Smurf and a little less sex. The tradeoff would justify itself.

I will never listen to the theme song of smurfs again the same way.

You wrote that surprizingly well...

I liked it.

good story. kinky hahaha

*Laughs her fucking little ass off*
"I swear to god!,in all my years of being addicted toporny fanfiction,I have never come across a smurf story,you write well ^ _ ^
I kinda got sick in the begining but became used to the idea after the 1st chappie...Keep truckin! XD

I though it was very good overall, but you missed one minor detail, from what I remember, when the episode where they first got Baby Smurf, Pappa Smurf said that their childhood lasts for five thousand years! So they don't actualy grow up quite as fast as we do. Other thant itt it's great.